Opinion
essay
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Opinion essay is a formal piece of essay writing which presents the
author’s point of view on a particular subject supported by reasons and
examples. The opposing viewpoint is also suggested, it goes with arguments that
show that it is unconvincing.
A Successful Opinion Essay Consists of:
§ An introduction
where the topic and the author’s opinion are stated clearly.
§ A main body where
viewpoints supported by reasons are presented in several paragraphs. This
section has also the opposing viewpoint which is proved to be unconvincing.
§ A conclusion where
the main points of the essay are summarized and the author’s opinion is
restated in other words.
Useful Tips for Writing
an Opinion Essay:
§ Decide your opinion
as for the topic discussed
§ Make a list of
viewpoints and reasons supporting your point of view
§ Write
well-developed paragraphs
§ Use linking words
and phrases to join the sentences and the paragraphs within the text
§ Start each
paragraph with a topic sentence
§ Address to the
reader directly
§ Start with a
quotation
§ Start with a
thought provoking or rhetorical question
§ Refer to some
striking or unusual fact, idea or situation
§ As far as I am
concerned, …
§ I am (not)
convinced that …
§ In my opinion/view …
§ My opinion is that …
§ I (firmly)believe …
§ I (definitely)
feel/think that …
§ I am inclined to
believe that …
Basic
Doe’s in Writing Opinion Essays:
Write in a formal style
Introduce the topic clearly
State clear topic sentences
Use generalizations
Use quotations
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Basic
Dont’s in Writing an Opinion Essay:
Don’t use colloquial
expressions
Don’t use short forms
Don’t use emotive vocabulary
Don’t use
over-generalizations
Don’t use statistics without
proper referencing
Don’t give personal examples
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Mobile phones at school (For and Against essay)
Introduction +Thesis: Nowadays more and more students bring their mobile phones to school.
While I believe that students should carry mobile phones in case of an
emergency, I am strongly opposed to phones being used at school,
particularly in the classroom.
Body: Firstly, many students travel to and from school without their parents. Therefore,
it is important for them to have a mobile phone in case they need help or have
an accident on the way to school or home. Furthermore, parents who work
may need to contact their children. For example, if a parent has to work late,
the student has to be told if arrangements have been made for a relative or
neighbour to look after them. On the other hand, nothing is more disruptive during a lesson than the sound of a mobile phone ringing or playing an annoying tune. Moreover, students who send and receive text messages in class are not paying attention to the lesson.
In conclusion, I feel that students should be allowed to take mobile phones to school for use in an emergency. However, all phones should certainly be turned off during lessons.
2. (PROBLEM SOLVING) (For essay)
Many students do not finish school. Why is this, and how can the problem
be solved?
School Drop-Outs: Problems and
Solutions
Introduction:Today, although most students complete school, a large
number still drop out because of family, social and work pressures. This
problem requires serious action from both individuals and the government.
Body:Most students who do not complete school do so 1. because of
family problems. 1.a. Girls, especially, want to get married and start a
family. 1.b. Some parents are not interested in education and do not
support their children in studying. 2. Social problems are also a
contributing factor. 2.a Education is compulsory but, despite this, some
people do not take it seriously. Furthermore, 2.b. jobs are
available even if students do not have a good education. 3. The third reason
is work pressure. 3.a Some families are poor and need their children
to work in order to increase the income. All these problems will create young
people who do not have any skills and who will not be able to improve their
lives for the family and the country.
There are several things that can be done about these problems. Parents
should be encouraged to send their children to school. Schools with
baby-minding facilities should be opened specially for married students. The
government needs to stress the importance of education and even offer financial
support to students to continue. This will encourage students to stay at school
rather than start working.
In conclusion, there are several things that the government can do to allow more
people to finish school. However, a number of society attitudes also
have to change if the country’s young people are to achieve their full
potential
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